I have made the changes suggested by Mr. Wroe and I outlined in my last post.
One of these have been to the title - Blockbuster sounds like a magazine that would be similar in content to Empire and Total Film and would meet their conventions i.e. would celebrate film rather than criticise; look at big budget films not just arthouse cinema.
I have changed the grammatical errors and finally the colours so all of the text was move easily visible
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